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Unread 26 May 2006, 06:08   #1
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the context goes '...outside of genetic disorders and diseases that can occur (and have been proven to occur) at any age; people are fully in control of their health regardless of age. A healthy youth will practically guarantee a healthier...'

'old-age'?
'elderliness'? (obviously not but you get the point)

I fear i'm having a mental block and need a clear path revealed to me.

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I would write:

"apart from genetic disorders and diseases which are known to occur at any age, people are fully in control of their health. Staying healthy in youth will practically guarantee a healthier old age."

The problem with what you have is that if you go for 'old age' then youre using the word 'age' 3 times and it looks horrible. Your first sentence is already fairly dubious since youre using 'age' twice. This way youre still using 'health' 3 times but I dont think it looks quite as bad. Perhaps you could replace "staying healthy" with "taking care of {yourself/your body}" in order to bring in some variation.
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"A healthy youth almost invariably leads to a healthy old age" or such perhaps?
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Unread 26 May 2006, 09:42   #4
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Right, i see what you mean Nod, shouldn't really write essays at 4 in the morning of the day it's due.

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Re: looking for a word.
Little ambiguous tho

"apart from genetic disorders (and diseases which are known to occur at any age)"
"apart from (genetic disorders and diseases) which are known to occur at any age"

Just if it's something scientific that's probably bad.
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What about accidents or injuries?
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I only had to have a view on disease processes and pathologies, not traumas.

It was only a short essay and including traumas would've been beyond what was asked.
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