That article is so badly written (not your part) that I feel almost compelled to clean it up a bit. To be honest, it probably needs rewritten from scratch because it currently has that bad 'feel' of an article that was pieced together over time, with no real attempt at integration (specific problems are: too much useless detail and not enough generalities, writing which lacks conciseness and waffles on, and random mixing of past and present tenses)
edit: I had a go at
cleaning it up (here is the
original for reference, and a list of my changes
here) but it's still complete shit so someone might want to fix it. The paragraph starting "Players attack planets, a strategic task (each unit has several stats)" is especially in need of a rewrite, but I dont really know anything aobut PA these days so didnt want to touch it. The part on battle groups is also pretty bad, as is the bit about Score/Value. Some sort of proper structure (History/Game Mechanism) would also be a good idea because it's a bit random at present.