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Unread 20 Sep 2003, 23:41   #1
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And it's a song by me!

I'm writing a song for all of you tonight.


The lyric is like this:

Please come back
I need you
You left me
but I think you love me

[refrain]

Why did you leave me
I loved you so
It used to be just me and you

[/refrain]

When did you leave
It's so hard to remember
I never stopped loving you
We were together

Why did you leave me
I loved you so
It used to be just me and you

Why did I leave you
You were the one
The one who was there for me
When I needed you for something

Why did you leave me
I loved you so
It used to be just me and you

So many nights I've been awake
Thinking about the things you said
What did you say
I can't remember

Why did you leave me
I loved you so
It used to be just me and you

Whenever I see you
On the other side of the street
You tell me
Let's not meet

Why did you leave me
I loved you so
It used to be just me and you

[Bonus stanza with regards to MM]

Baby I want you to know!
I never stopped looking through your bathroom window
When you thought nobody was there
It's true

[Extra corporate whore edition stanza]

And baby one more thing
I know you didn't want it
You know that's why I never gave it
But here goes nothing:
Now, finally
I give you
My
Respect




It's pretty don't you think?






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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 00:06   #2
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i think it ****ing sucks!
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 00:13   #3
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It needs more work.
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 00:34   #4
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I read it over the phone to a female friend of mine.
we all know you were on the phone to your mum, you're just trying to be ambiguous
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 00:35   #5
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I read it over the phone to a female friend of mine.

She giggled




Looks as I'm finally reaching fame.

I had a special feeling about this song when I wrote it; I knew it was going to be a hit.

Thank you all for your support, I wouldn't be here if it weren't for you.






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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 09:34   #6
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I read it over the phone to a female friend of mine.

She giggled
wait wait... so you read a song you found on GD, to a real-life girl?
I don't know who to be worried about more... you or Matrim

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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 09:37   #7
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its a bit silly

but i write bad poety when i am drunk so i shouldnt really say anything
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 20:44   #8
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bloomers' rap is the best.
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 20:44   #9
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 20:49   #10
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bloomers' rap is the best.
why arent you on irc?
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 20:54   #11
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why arent you on irc?

because i haven't got round to downloading it yet.

2 minutes.
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 21:28   #12
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Re: my song

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...im bringin my thing outta the aussie rap scene...
That made me laugh
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Unread 21 Sep 2003, 23:41   #13
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real-life girl

YES. WITH REAL ASL AND EVERYTHING.
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Unread 22 Sep 2003, 13:06   #14
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You never used the phrase 'Baby I want you to know' once, so it's going to be a flop.
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Unread 22 Sep 2003, 17:51   #15
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I tried the best I could to implement all the necessary components, but I have been made aware that one of these is missing.

I will now edit my song and make it the hit I deserve.




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Unread 22 Sep 2003, 18:22   #16
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I tried the best I could to implement all the necessary components, but I have been made aware that one of these is missing.

I will now edit my song and make it the hit I deserve.




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You forgot one more thing...
You remember those songs by those skin-coloured playaz with l33t rappaz skill0rz? Well, they score hits, and they are always talking about "teh respect for tha woman". You really should include "respect" for this to become a hit!
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Unread 22 Sep 2003, 18:49   #17
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You forgot one more thing...
You remember those songs by those skin-coloured playaz with l33t rappaz skill0rz? Well, they score hits, and they are always talking about "teh respect for tha woman". You really should include "respect" for this to become a hit!

Done. Though now I'm afraid I cannot do any more adjustments to my song. I don't want it to completely lose touch with its roots.




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