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Unread 22 Jul 2007, 17:30   #18
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Re: Opinions Please
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Originally Posted by djbass
Didn't get a chance to hear the revised version.

Puting the guitar riff a pitch higher instead of lowering the bassline seems to have made it sound a little like a sitar, gives it a kinda middle-eastern tint.

Second one is nice and fluent, but still sounds too much like radiohead/muse (not surprising I guess since the latter is listed as an Influence).

I still have hope for the first, I think later I might attempt to play with the motif myself and see if i can extend the concept.
I need to take a bit of a break from it as I can't find anywhere to take version 2 so I've ended up with a 3 minute version with the exact same constant bass line, removing the guitar for the verse (might try and put something there later) and having interludes of cello (shoud I find a way to make some).

I'll have a look at version 1 at a later date and I'll probably make a version combining the both of them into one song. If I end up with only three versions of this song then I'll be happy.
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